TMBRFNL Chapter 14

Life makes Kiriko much tired. Kiriko sleep now~

Enjoy the chapter~nya~ *yawn*

Credits:
TL: Kiriko
Editor: Ghost


TMBRFNL Chapter 14: Those who point their blades

“Fuaaaahh~~~”

 

Within the underground cell, the echo of a loud, unstifled yawn caused numerous sharp gazes to be directed towards its source.

 

“Why are you yawning without a care in the world!? Wasn’t it your job to protect us!? If so, why did you just  obediently let yourself get caught without even trying to resist!?”

 

As Fract shouted that, Alhart lazily turned his eyes towards him.

 

“Oh please, Prince. The request we accepted was to be guards for the ‘Saintess’. You guys aren’t part of the deal. To begin with, someone who vigorously jumped into the fray, then quickly had the tables turned on him doesn’t have the right to talk. To lose to those amateurs who haven’t even grown any hair out yet, just how weak are you?

 

“What did you say!?”

 

Alhart watched the enraged Fract with a big sneer on his face.

 

“What? You wanna go, young master?”

 

“How dare you look down on me!!”

 

Fract’ss brandished fist cut through the air. His remaining forward momentum caused him to fall as Alhart tripped him.

 

“You-!!”

 

Somehow managing to keep his balance, Fract once again raised his fist. This time, however, before he could bring it down, he was stopped by Kuroitsu.

 

“Please do not get carried away with your games too much, Alhart.”

 

“I’m bored, so it can’t be helped.”

 

“If that’s the case, then a good time-killer just arrived. I, too, have become rather bored of staying quiet. On top of that, Sylti’s presence seems to be approaching, so it’s about time to start fighting back.”

 

At the same time Kuroitsu said that, several men came rushing to the front of the cell.

 

“Time to fight back, huh. These guys are Sylti’s leftovers, right?”

 

“So it would appear. Perhaps they came to use us as hostages against Sylti. We could obediently become hostages, but if we don’t start our counterattack soon, Sylti will probably tell us off quite sternly later.”

 

“Ahh, it’s gonna be a pain either way, but dealing with Sylti after pissing her off is pretty hard……”

 

Quickly deciding that it couldn’t be helped, Alhart approached the prison cell’s bars.

 

“Hey, kidnappers. It seems like you’ve got some business with us, but it’s best if you stay ju~st a little farther away from there.”

 

“W-What the hell is that woman!? Is she one of your allies!? Is she!?”

 

“T-That……without any hesitation, she……”

 

“Oii, listen when people are talking to you. It’ll be dangerous unless you move from there……oh, ahh, it’s too late.”

 

“Eh?”

 

The same moment Alhart suddenly dodged to the side, several black fireballs came flying towards the men.

 

Instantly passing through the iron bars standing between Alhart’s group and the men, the black fire mercilessly attacked the kidnappers, causing them to burst up in flames the moment it touched them.

 

“AaaaAAaHHHHH!!!”

 

“H-Hot!! Please, put them out!!!!”

 

“Gyaaahh!!”

 

They let out agonized cries. As the men burned in the black flames, Alhart and Kuroitsu exited the cell, looking down at them expressionlessly.

 

“I told you it’d be best to stay farther away.”

 

“Hmph. How noisy.”

 

Kuroitsu snapped his fingers. Immediately after he did so, the black flames that had been burning the men went out.

 

Inside of that space in which the smell of burning human flesh lingered, Alhart and Kuroitsu (as well as Miliane) focused on searching for their stolen luggage instead, as though they were accustomed to the odour.

 

“Hiii…no……..”

 

“Gu-…….ueee…”

 

“……tsk…”

 

Akari cowered in fear and shivered as she cried.

 

Fract vomited with a pale face.

 

Tedla, like Fract, had a pale face as he furrowed his eyebrows.

 

Without regard for their reactions, Alhart went back into the cell and grabbed Akari’s arm.

 

“Kyaaaaaa!! Nooooo!!”

 

Alhart heartlessly dragged a half-crazed Akari out of the cell as she struggled violently. It was at this point that he finally turned his attention towards the men who were still  in agony.

 

“Say, where is our carriage?”

 

“Aaahhh……it hurts……..hur…ts…”

 

“No, like I asked, where’s the carriage?”

 

“P-Ple…please stop! N-No more!!”

 

“……oi, Kuro. You went too far. At least make it so that they can properly talk.”

 

“Even if you tell me that, I did hold back quite a bit……There are other people; it’s fine if we just ask them, is it not?”

 

“That’s true. Then let’s meet up with Sylti first. Don’t drop the Saintess, Kuro.”

 

“I know. Follow behind us properly, Miliane.”

 

“Ah, y-yes.”

 

At Kuroitsu’s words, Miliane hastily hid behind a wooden box. Seeing her appearance, Alhart smiled wryly while shrugging his shoulders. Then, taking the lead, he walked forward.

Following him was Kuroitsu (who was still dragging the half-crazed Akari) and at the end of the line was Miliane as she used nearby shields to hide herself.

 

Incidentally, Fract and Tedla, who had been left behind, followed after the four with Tedla, who had returned to his senses first, lending his shoulder to Fract.

 

“Yo, Sylti. We’ve made you spend some effo-……uwah!!”

 

A little less than 10 minutes after they left the prison. Sylti, who was coming towards them from the opposite side with Tieltinkle, raised her hand and sent a ball of water flying at Alhart.

It hit his face and burst, causing Alhart to become soaked.

 

“…….Sylti, what are you doing?”

 

“Are you awake now, Al? Could you explain why things turned out like this?”

 

“Even if you ask me to…didn’t you hear from Tiel? We were abducted by the mountain bandits.”

 

“I’m. Asking. You. Why? Fulfill the ‘request’ properly, geez.”

 

“I’ll do my job properly according to the ‘contents of the request’. This time……well, yeah. It’s cause it was tiresome!”

 

“……”

 

Splash! This time, a large amount of water came pouring down from above, soaking Alhart once again.

 

After seeing him like that, Syltina looked refreshed.

 

“Well then, in any case we’ve managed to safely meet up. All that’s left is to take back the carriage. Shall we hurry up and leave then?”

 

“Sylti, do you know where the carriage is?”

 

“It seems to be parked behind the mansion. I’m not sure how safe the provisions and other luggage are, but Tiel said that the horses are still tied to it.”

 

“Behind the mansion, huh……for now let’s head back up.”

 

At Alhart’s words, Syltina’s group went up to the first floor together. What they saw there was a group of people lying in wait while holding several weapons.

 

Most of the people holding these weapons were women and children. Seeing that there were some people holding crude “weapons” such as kitchen knives and scissors, Alhart made a fed up expression and sighed at the situation.

 

“Oi oi, are you telling us to go up against women and children next?”

 

“If you had at least run away, then we could have ignored you; but to think that you would once again point your blades towards the people that you were no match for earlier……there’s a limit to how foolish you can be.”

 

“Shut up!! Those men you killed were our comrades, and the husbands and fathers of these guys!!”

 

“That’s right! How dare you do that to my husband?!! Unforgivable!!”

 

“We’re gonna avenge father!!!!”

 

“ “ “Ouuu!!!!” ” ”

 

Glaring at Syltina and co. with hatred in their eyes, they raised their angry fists.

 

The men, women and children were all there only to take down their most hated “enemies” that now stood before their eyes.

 

“Even though it’s not like we really wanted to go and kill people……”

 

“But, well, we haven’t given up on our lives to the point where we’d let some openly hostile guys come and kill us without resisting at all.”

 

“Unfortunately, whether you’re a man, woman, or child, we won’t have any mercy on those who attack us while armed.”

 

As Sylti and co. drew their blades, tension filled the air.

 

After a brief period of silence, when the tension had reached its limit and what remained of the mountain bandits were about to move, a voice called out to stop both parties.

 

“W-Wait!! Please wait!!”

 

The voice belonged to Akari, who had been a weeping mess until just a few moments ago.

 

“You must be kidding me……”

 

Raising her voice, Akari stood between the two groups. Seeing her actions, Syltina muttered tiredly while placing a hand on her forehead.

 

“Kuroitsu-sa~n?”

 

Syltina glared at Kuroitsu, who should have been holding onto Akari’s arm, with bitter eyes. In return, Kuroitsu just shrugged his shoulders timidly.

 

“It’s not like they’ll suddenly cut her down for cutting between us.”

 

“That might be true, but letting her move around freely like that is troublesome for various reasons. That’s why, please hold her back a little, would you?”

 

“It is fine as long as she doesn’t die, correct?”

 

“Even so, she’s the sort that sticks her head into troublesome things if you leave her to her own devices. Despite being completely powerless, she’s a little walking trouble who holds some weird sense of confidence in herself, so there’s a need to restrict her movements to a certain extent.”

 

“Understood. I’ll handle it more carefully next time.”

 

“I’ll leave it to you……………now then-”

 

After finishing her conversation with Kuroitsu, she turned back around and found Akari glancing sharply at her.

 

“Were you listening!?”

 

“No, not at all.”

 

Even though Syltina looked towards Alhart in an attempt to seek an explanation for Akari’s anger, the instant he realized that the battle’s start was going to be postponed, he had begun to fall asleep. Thus, Syltina’s silent complaint failed to reach him.

 

“I was asking, why can you kill people so easily!?”

 

Akari questioned her.

 

“Why, you ask……isn’t it obviously because I don’t want to die?”

 

Just what kind of stupid thing was the Saintess in front of her asking?

 

In the face of a blade bearing clear killing intent, just why would she ask about “something like that”?

 

“An important person was killed”. That was probably the reason why they had pointed their blades at them. However, that was by no means a reason to obediently let themselves be killed.

 

“Why didn’t you try to talk things out!?”

 

“……hah?”

 

The sound that Syltina reflexively let out exposed her inner thoughts, which were saying “What the hell is this girl talking about?”.

 

“People who want to kill others don’t exist! That being the case, isn’t it best to talk things through!? Because we are all human!!”

 

“…………”

 

In an extremely natural way, as though she couldn’t be wrong at all, Akari said this with remarkable self-confidence.

 

“Talking things through-”

 

Things have already gone far past that point – Syltina silently murmured.


Editor Comments:

I was lazy and didn’t edit this for a while (Thedas needed an Inquisitor). It also got delayed because the final touches (which I do with Kiriko) took some time (this one was Kiriko’s fault). Anyhow, hope you enjoy the chapter and stuff.


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44 Responses to TMBRFNL Chapter 14

  1. Miri-Bell says:

    Thank you for the new chapter! Wow Akari is more than twice as delusional then what I had first assumed.

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    • Tran says:

      She considers herself the heroine. All she does is righteous and just, ect.

      The fact that the people they’re killing resorted to banditry as a direct result of her actions doesn’t matter to her. As the heroine it is her role to improve her standing by redeeming them with her “gentle spirit” and harsh reprimand for the evil killers.

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      • I’m beginning to get the impression that Author-san got sick and tired of standard pollyanna LN/Manga/Anime tropes and began writing this story in reaction.

        It is true that a lot of those tropes have a kernel of truth in them, but the way that other authors allow ‘gentle spirit’ approaches to resolve situations with the ease of a magical girl waving a wand does grate on me, and I’ll bet it grates on Author-san as well.

        There’s a lot of (justifiable) hate for Akari in the comments thus far, but I personally hope the long range plan is to watch this character wake the f**k up to how real life works.

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  2. yuukiunivers says:

    Thank you for this chapter! ^^Refreshing as ever !

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  3. lygarx says:

    Ugh. damn liberals.

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  4. kirindas says:

    Thanks for the new chapter! Well Akari is from a modern society, so her views are rooted as such. She just completely fails to realize she’s not in Japan anymore for her views to hold merit. >_>

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  5. Chaku says:

    I get how peeps are annoyed with the “Saintess” but Im just as annoyed at Sylt, they need to explain her character, because right now shes just some OP Mary Sue and I really hate Mary Sues.
    Sakura on Naruto is practically a Mary Sue, shes done fk all throughout the series yet suddenly at the end she is uber powerful on par with Tsunade, Im like fk that shit!

    There needs to be some kind of background that tells us her journey from then till now, this afterwards feeling is unsatisfying. She can pull anything out of her ass without any explanation on how that got there, shes only been away 2 years lol 2 years shes suddenly like this? damn thats some op speed growth to go from what she was to what she is now. She spoke of how desperate she lived when she was cast out, yet theres no reflection of that in this person, all those trials are implied, we dont see what caused her scars, we dont see how she gained such power so quickly.

    Till thats done shes a Mary Sue, just like that shitty Saintess.

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    • Kuro Neko says:

      I don’t see how she’s a Mary Sue but okay

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      • Chaku says:

        There is no explanation to why shes so strong after only 2 years, she says she struggled to survive yet 2 years later here she is with powerful allies, and super powers lol. She struggled to do all this shit for that country and they never explained why, shes in school yet shes running the country behind the scenes? lol, when she left their country fell into ruin?? how the hell is that not a Mary Sue

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        • violetgale says:

          Stuff we knew based on the first few chapters: …before she was banished/expelled and had her title and engagement taken away, our MC was a Duke’s daughter and the fiancé of the Prince. She was the future queen. At school she was probably in Student council along with her fiancé and the capture targets. Everyone neglected their school duties to hang out/flirt with Akari so our MC had to step it up and do all of their school jobs. In addition, due to her suspicions about Akari she looked up at what kind of damage she was doing to the country: noticing that the monsters/bad stuff showed up when Akari did, noticing the funds being used for Akari’s pampered lifestyle, and no one is doing their jobs well so they could dote/ get on the good side of Akari/Saint-sama.

          Stuff we learned in the chapter about MC’s new friends/guild and the yandere stalker that loves our MC: Our MC’s childhood friends from another country did adventuring with her when she visited them. She didn’t do hardcore adventuring because she was a noble and thought she would be queen in the future. So she had the basics down when she was banished. Her friends that are strong adventurers in the Mercenary guild probably aided her in training for 2 years and gave her shelter when she had no where to go. The reason why she is OP 😀

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        • Jenny Huang says:

          I don’t understand your comment, the story did explain everything barring the adventures during her 2 years.

          1. “There is no explanation to why shes so strong after only 2 years, she says she struggled to survive yet 2 years later here she is with powerful allies, and super powers lol.”

          They explained why she got so strong after only 2 years. Slytina was both blessed and cursed to being a high ranking noble lady who would ascend the throne as Queen. Slytina was given the proper education required in all fields, including sword-fighting and magic. 2 years ago, her skills were to the point of being “adequate” because she inherently would not require the skills, as she’s Queen, thus wouldn’t need to fight on the battlefield. However when she was exiled 2 years ago, Slytina took up sword-fighting and magic earnestly because that was her only way to survive. Since she already had the proper foundation, going from adequate to superb wasn’t difficult. Then her allies, the story showed that she’s been friends with Clarina, Jin and Alhart for many years, she’s also been affiliated with the guild even before her 2 year exile.

          2. “She struggled to do all this shit for that country and they never explained why, shes in school yet shes running the country behind the scenes?”

          Once again, they did explain why. Slytina told her brother the wish of the her of 2 years ago. She was the future Queen and her wish was to ascend the throne along with Fract to better support her country. She didn’t run the country, she supported it. The ones in charge of the political side were the King and the Ministers. The ones in charge of public order were the Knights. Slytina wasn’t the one actively in charge, she was the one who ran everywhere making sure everything was running properly because that’s her responsibility as the future Queen.

          3.”lol, when she left their country fell into ruin??”

          The country didn’t fall to ruin directly because Slytina was exiled. Her exile was the catalyst. After she was exiled, the Minister of Finance resigned from his post, because he, as the person in charge of the national taxes, knew Slytina did not embezzle funds, therefore her exile was based on trumped up crimes. Then Knight Commander also resigned from his post, and his substitute who was supposed to take up his post REJECTED the promotion and disappeared shortly afterwards, leaving the post of Knight Captain and Sub-Knight Captain empty – which in turns left the Knight legion without leaders and ceased to function. Then at a party, a certain girl (probably Akari) made careless statements and caused the ire of all the nobles, who then returned to their territory and REFUSED to come out.

          So now, you have a country with no Minister of Finance, no Knight legion, and no nobles. Without the Minister of Finance keeping a check on the national tax fund, more and more money kept leaving the fund because of Akari’s lavish lifestyle until the government body ceased to function due to lack of funds. The taint in lands has been spreading, thus leaving less land for agriculture to be grown. The common people are growing hungry and discontent with the monarchy. The common people riots and because the Knights legion has ceased to function, there is no one to quell the riots, causing people to die in said riots. The nobles aren’t there to pitch in and send relief supplies to the common people, and the monarchy has no funds to use either. The bodies of the dead aren’t cleaned up, causing them to rot and a plague has spread among the common people.

          It wasn’t Slytina’s departure from the country that made it fall to ruin. Her departure/exile caused important key figures to resign from post and Akari’s lavish lifestyle and unruly attitude that caused the country to decay.

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        • violetgale says:

          I guess my explanation was too inadequate 😥

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    • poile says:

      “they need to explain her character, because right now shes just some OP Mary Sue and I really hate Mary Sues.”
      Are we reading the same story?

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      • violetgale says:

        I thought I explained it well 😦
        The country fell to ruin because the king/important government people weren’t doing their jobs properly after Akari came into the picture, so slowly the nobles and knight captain abandoned their duties and nothing was getting done. The whole country was in a panic.
        The only one who was thinking about the country was our MC, but since she was booted out, the last remaining person doing a proper job in the kingdom was gone.

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  6. violetgale says:

    ….Akari is one of the most ridiculous characters ever made. Some part of me wishes Akari was replaced by a more reasonable character that could accept a little bit of change. But then I think to myself, who would the villain be??
    Answer: the king, Prince, and Akari’s followers 😡
    They are the perfect back-up villains, there is no need for Akari… They set up our MC as the fall guy for their money problems…
    Ex(King): Oops, I spent all this tax money on the “Saint” and my family ….I guess I’ll frame that one annoying girl who is in the way of my son marrying the Saint ;P

    Like they don’t deserve to run a country!!! Dx

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    • Tran says:

      In previous chapters they’ve all but outright stated that Sylti’s mercenary organization is planning to topple the nation as part of her current job.

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      • violetgale says:

        I know xD
        But I had to say it. Akari is like a delusional middle schooler that thinks they are omnipotent to any danger….it’s like she has never heard of the Bad End in games xD
        She is so frustrating that I am amazed at our MC for not trying to strangle Akariwhen she opens her mouth and says idiotic things.

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  7. Van Nguyen says:

    Thanks for the translations!! And ughhh Akari’s so annoying.

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  8. Yzrahc `dryzzle ( ̄^ ̄)ゞ says:

    (҂◡̀_◡́)ᕤ Akari is… *sigh* annoying.stupid.irritating to the max!
    Somebody kick her! ((◑_◑) too harsh? nah, she deserves it)

    Thank you for the chapter ༼ つ ◕o◕ ༽つfu

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  9. chamchaworld says:

    Well, if she’s a real transmigrated person, I can’t really blame Akari. Even though there are war around us now, but some of us (or at least me) live in a peaceful place safely. If Akari come from a peaceful place like that, killing people might be too hard for her (especially since they are woman and children). The first thing that Sylty should do before the journey is educate her that they world is not a happy place so she should throw away her moral value.

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    • violetgale says:

      Should educate Akari by beating her up till she is HALF-dead 😀
      It’s okay because it is another world and I have no idea what the actual laws are in that imaginary country. Like there are probably no child abuse laws since in other web novels I hear of the parents selling their children into slavery/marriage for money or kids meetting with pedos.
      Ex: those jap web novels that tell how the MC’s slave’s became slaves, those Chinese web novels of parents sending their daughters into marriages with people they don’t like for money and power, and those unfortunate noble kids about to be assaulted by bandits before the MC swoops in saves the day xD
      ….Thank you God for allowing me to have a nice family that lives in a okay country with laws and for no pedos lurking around during much childhood 🙂

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  10. meiraeve says:

    Thank you for the chapter!!!
    Wow… Akari really is your normal kind of shoujo heroine… Glad our REAL heroine is Syltina XD

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  11. xtostos says:

    Considering how much of a power difference there is between the ‘good’ party and the bandits, they ought to have any number of ways to deal with the situation without significantly harming and getting harmed by anyone. At this point their choice to kill them is not by necessity but by laziness.
    Same as a regular person encountering a small, moderately harmless animal and choosing to run it over with a car instead of simply avoiding it one way or another.
    The protagonist started out nicely but delves deeper and deeper into exactly the same sort of idiocity that Akari and Co. display, albeit in a different context.

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    • 295Phoenix says:

      I’m not seeing a reason why the good party should go out of their way to go easy with the bandits. Think of what those bandits do to people not stronger than them…they’ll rob, murder, and sell them into slavery. Akari would be getting sold into slavery if not for Syltina’s group. And what should they do if they just capture them? Leave them be so they can be a threat to the next people passing through? Drag them back to the capital where the kingdom will just execute them?

      And your example with the “small, moderately harmless animal” doesn’t work. Moderately harmless animals don’t sell people into slavery and try to kill those who resist. Your problem is that you’re reading this through modern, peaceful civilization goggles which is not the setting they’re living in.

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    • Harmless animal? I’d say more like a mosquito, you can leave it be, however although it might not be a menace to you, remember that it could infect someone else with some virus

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    • Jenny Huang says:

      I think their attitude to situations like this fits their professions. Slytina and co. are mercenaries and for them, it’s a eat or be eaten world. If people come at them with weapons, are they supposed to let them go because they are weaker? Why should they, because if they were the weaker ones, they’d be dead. The characters even stated, if you didn’t come at them with weapons, then they could’ve spared them.

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  12. Sabrina says:

    Thank you!!!

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  13. lonipony says:

    Thanks for the chapter 😀

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  14. barbaricbob says:

    The saint of stupidity and talking bullshittery! A patron saint of so many people in this world

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  15. 295Phoenix says:

    So, the same conniving girl that framed an innocent woman and had her lose everything is saying, “Thou shalt not kill!” when you’re attacked by armed people who want to either rob you, kill you, or kidnap you? What is this chick’s malfunction?

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    • Jenny Huang says:

      Rather than Akari’s brain malfunctioning, it’s Akari not understanding a very important point as stated in a previous chapter. The story is taking place in a WORLD, not a GAME. Akari is still going through life thinking this is a GAME where she is the protagonist/heroine. The villianess is supposed to be Slytina, and Slytina’s BAD END is her being exiled from the country for bullying the protagonist and stealing from the national taxes. However, this WORLD isn’t the same as the GAME. It doesn’t necessarily have to follow that plotline. The people of this world “love” Slytina so Akari took matters into her own hand and framed her with the help of her fanboys and the king. However, the protagonist is supposed to be gentle and peace-loving, so she must advocate non-violence hence “Thou shalt not kill” attitude (although when you find out HOW Akari gets to this world, you’d see how hypocritical Akari is)

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  16. (8^皿^8)Thanks♪
    I really like the turned tables sort of story that this is, no needless righteousness, no forgiving those who don’t deserve it or better yet not forgetting their wrongs.
    You all are awesome for providing us with this novel!

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  17. Night says:

    Akari was hilarious certainly. But it’s sad to see mc becoming twisted, considering her final plan and everything. And the other characters are also very decisive to the point of being sadist. Thanks for the chapter!

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  18. Asbolus says:

    Hmm Akari is naive, a poorly developed antagonist. Sly is getting too nonchalant and op, there’s nothing that truely angers her, nothing that challenges her, absolutely nothing. It’s like, oh I took a bath and my comrades are kidnapped. Overanalyse the situation with 4 big reasons and then go after them

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    • Owl says:

      I think it’s more to deal with the fact that she knows they’re not really in any danger and Al is just playing around. To be honest though, villagers turned bandits are fairly low level threats vs mercenaries who kill for a living.

      It’s like asking any guy you get off the street to go into a knife fight (not even a gunfight which has some element of equality in weapons) vs SAS or SEALs, the quality difference is huge. As for things like ‘bring them in alive’ and the Miranda code, those are cultural evolutions unique to our world and in the case of the Miranda code, it’s not even international and limited to the US.

      “You do NOT have the right to remain silent. Anything you don’t say will be taken as obstructing justice and can be used to beat the shit out of you”
      “You have the right to an attorney, if you can’t afford one, too bad.”
      Welcome to the rest of the world Yankee.
      😛

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  19. lil vampire says:

    oh how delusional can one be not to realize they are the root of the problem for 2 years now.we can all at least say the syl in only in it for the money.

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  20. L Hilyer says:

    The “People who want to kill others don’t exist! That being the case, isn’t it best to talk things through!? Because we are all human!!” made me literally facepalm….. she really is an idiot

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  21. Panzer says:

    So for the people saying she’s not a mary sue I found a list of characteristics that make a mary sue. Without further ado here are the points:

    1.- The character doesn’t move in funtion of the world, the world moves in function of the character.
    -The highest point of this is how she came in contact with the guild of super humans, that at ages 5 to 10 were stronger than the knights of the realm and when kidnapped, somehow her parents decided to befriend the kidnappers and hang out with them. And as adults they seem powerful enough to take over countries without problems but never acted upon this for unknow reasons, that is until mary sue entered the picture.
    -There is also the point that they are super strong but somehow everyone else is weak as a normal human.
    -Every important military officer and noble respnsile for running the country dissapeared when she did, and even though the king can appoint people to fill these roles, no one fills them. These is supposedly explained by the fact that everyone refused,. Like that was an option in the face of the king, specially after a major exile just occured.

    2.- Practically has no defects
    -The author takes it a step too far by making everyone else extremelly flawed, to the point that i cant help but ask myself “how the hell was the country running before her”. This is the classic “everyone is stupid but MC(and gang)” story.

    3.-Mary sue is the center of attention of the main characters and is extremely admired
    -Here i have to say that is applies only to main characters. as we know akari supporters don’t love her.

    4.-Has some sort of power that makes her special.
    -She and her gang seem to be blessed with super strong magics that somehow can’t be aquired or are plainly unknown by the other humans altough, supposedly magic is a part of the world (just not a part of the world of the non mary sues apparently).
    -This was brought before but ill bring it back again: she becomes crazy powerful in 2 years, to what some one else answered “going from adequate to superb wasn’t difficult.” becuase of her previous small training, then why doesn’t the brother that trained for years isn’t better than her? The answer is simple: In a mary sue story everyone that is not mary sue(and her gang) no matter how many excruciating hours of training they pour into their training, will never be at mary sue level. While she was trained by the mary sue gang that at age 5 were powerful enough to beat all knights that came at them.

    5.-Has some sort of talent or expertise that defies her young age
    -we know that she somehow was running the country behind the scenes. Even thou she didn’t had the autority. This by the way goes unexplained so i wont delve much into it. But we know that se as the future queen had her hands in everything related to running the country.

    6.- Mary sue has an extremely atipycal tragic past
    – the fact that everyone in the kingdom, including her family (wich makes no sense) became extremely stupid and ruined their kingdom or left their positions. And then blamed her, exiled her and she was rescued by the “we can destroy countries if we so wish so” gang and became inexplicably strong too is very atipycal.

    7.- At least one characcter will fall in love with her (this point is kinda moot, since most stories have some sort of romance but bleh! it was on the list of things that makes a mary sue)
    -yeah the leader of the mary sue gang, Mary Stu.

    there were a few other points but they dont exactly fit or are moot like the MC being beautiful wich is as mainstream as romance.

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  22. Lock says:

    Thank you for the chapter!

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